A Family Perfected

A Family Perfected

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Tue, Jun 14, 2016
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Who are you?" I whispered through my sobs. I felt him loom over me and his hot breath shot in my ear, sending shivers down my spine. "Call me Father," he smiled. My heart shattered at his words. ** Vivian Love was counting on finally having the best birthday she's ever had. It was her sixteenth birthday and she was to celebrate with her closest friends, and maybe even talk to the cute guy from math class. What she wasn't counting on was being abducted by a delusional man, being hauled off to an old house in the middle of nowhere and being forced to play house. Vivian must hold onto whatever shred of hope she has left if she wants to make it out of this game alive with the help of the others imprisoned with her.
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•••Excerpt••• I walked Vivian up to her apartment. During the ride back she couldn't stop talking about the clothes she saw and her smile was constant. The spark in her eyes never left. How could I ask her to stay just because I was a self-centered fool. I'd miss her. "Thanks for dinner, Rich. I really appreciate it." I knew she meant for more than just dinner. "Your welcome, Viv." I hugged her. She was still here for another week. There's no need to go all sappy now. It was only 3 months. She'll be back before I know it. But for now, I needed this. To be with her. We pulled apart. That glow was still there. If I hadn't known any better, she looked like one of my many one night stands after hot sex. Wait, she looked like- "Oh, shit." "What is it?" She asked. Her face was surprised that I cursed out of nowhere. "Who is he?" I demanded. "Who's who?" "The man that you're fucking, Viv." *primarily in Vivian's pov, and this story was created about 3 years ago with not much editing. Sorry for the choppy style and grammar. I won't be changing it much because I wanna keep the memory of my writing.

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