Isolation
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John connors a long time crook was down on his luck and facing his first time in prison
Join him as he explores his new world.
This is something I wrote in english. It's a small essay come story with less than stellar reviews from my teacher and I'm looking for constructive criticism beyond " Use more paragraphs, please " So all ideas welcome.
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