Before we start I want people to understand a few things, one the summary was too long, so I'll be posting it as a chapter. Next the facts in this story are loosely based on things I've heard and believe might be possible, if they aren't, oh well, it's pretty much sci-fi, fantasy, so please don't bug me about what is or isn't true or possible, I do not care. That being said I don't mind constructive criticism, but don't bug me about the things I have just mentioned, talk about the story, what I could do better, more detail, less detail, the characters, did I make spelling or grammar errors that kind of stuff. This is a mature rated story, so if you cannot handle mature content I suggest you don't read this, it's not a emit fest or profanity pool, but expect things to happen at some point and when it does, do not complain, you've been warned, now enjoy the story and don't forget to comment and vote Salavana for president...or just vote for my story, that works too.All Rights Reserved
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