Life Through My Eyes
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MatureOngoing5m
Last published Wed, Mar 30, 2016
This is a short story I started awhile ago, and I just want to know if I should continue it or not. Any feedback would be lovely! The gist of the story is that the main character, Zarra, is fighting through High School all the while dealing with Depression and Anorexia.
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