A Day in the Life of the Typos

This story is about three girls, Hester, Amelia (Ame for short), and Mina. Hester is girl who is living her life through abuse from her parents. She can't tell anyone for the fear she'll be rejected from society further. Mina your classic geek. Bullied since elementary school had made her live her life in and through books. Ame is a girl who seems to have everything she wants, except love. Her father dead, mother has resorted to being a prostitute for money and to keep their valuables. Being overly insecure about her looks she becomes anorexic. Hester tranfers to Hoover high school after her incident back at Roosevelt. The same school Ame and Mina attend.

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