The fallen species

The fallen species

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I'm still working on it, i'm not the best writer... at all, and i've kinda gotten stuck in the story, comments and criticism appreciated. haha! got it edited xD need more but its more than four pages! more to come ASAP
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This is my first story written many years ago. Probably in between 2009-2010. It's not the best work, or even my best work, but it is definitely the only one that I've managed to complete. I can't remember what exactly spurred me into writing this story, but I know that this story is based on another creative work expressed through a different medium. You might be able to figure it out from the first chapter itself. The only person whom I can confirm finish reading this story is my wife (then girlfriend) who followed my story and waited for me to send her the following chapters upon its completion. I'm not sure what were her comments every time she reads a chapter, so maybe you can give me some feedback today? The story is generally considered as a mystery/thriller, but maybe you can give it a better description? I know that I love to write both academically and write creatively. I've had many ideas and unfinished works during my younger days. If this story takes off, I might consider going back into writing. It was my dream to be a casual writer/author when I was younger. So if you like what I have produced here, please do support it and maybe I'll be able to come out with more of such works. Thank you!

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