The Day I Lost My Brother
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Ages ago I took a driver's education course and one of my assignments was to write a short story on either:
a. The person at fault in a car crash for texting and driving
b. A third person view of a car crash resulting from texting and driving
or
c. The victim's family's point of view from a texting and driving induced car crash
I chose "c" and this is the mediocre short story of how one small text can end someone's large plans for life.
(This is a modified/updated/edited version based off of my original project)
**DISCLAIMER: this is not a true story but is based off of possible real life events that sadly occur daily
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STOP DISTRACTED DRIVING
Link to oath [to not text and drive] in bonus chapter!
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