The 'Innocent' Geese

So this is a possible story idea that I had. I'd really appreciate any feedback, whether it's on the grammar, story- whatever!! Let me know if you'd like to read more, let me know what you think so far, just let me know! Thanks for reading, I'll do my best to get back to anyone who leaves a comment!

(Just in case anyone gets this crazy idea- please don't steal any work that belongs to me.)