"I'm breaking up with you"

"I'm breaking up with you"

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(A Short Story.) It was less than a second, maybe half a second, but it changed everything. "I'm breaking up with you" she yelled, I felt my heart stop. //This story was initially for my English class and I came second place in a competition. Anyway I hope you enjoy this short story, and I would love some feedback.
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"You know you still want me." he said cockily. "As if!" I yelled at him. "I must say, I like the new look." he all but smirked. ************************** Alex was the shy, quiet nerd that nobody talked to. Although, she was shy at school she was quit loud, crazy , and pretty sarcastic. She just thought that nobody at school was worth her time. Damien was your typical cocky jock. He had the girls, the 'followers', and he was the captain of the soccer team. Now, you're probably wondering how they both fit in to the story. Well, they used to date. It just didn't end well. So, Alex now hates Damien. For the reason that he stole her heart and that he is, as she put it, "an egotistical asshole". ============================= Ok. So this is my first story I don't know how it will turn out. So, please comment and tell me how you think it's going. Oh and mild language.

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