"I'm breaking up with you"
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MatureComplete Fri, Apr 8, 2016<5 mins
(A Short Story.)
It was less than a second, maybe half a second, but it changed everything. "I'm breaking up with you" she yelled, I felt my heart stop.
//This story was initially for my English class and I came second place in a competition.
Anyway I hope you enjoy this short story, and I would love some feedback.
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