New age vampires
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This is not the usual blood sucking, immortal vampire story.
This story is about the dead people who live among us. We might not notice them but they exist. And you might be one of them...
This story is inspired from some people I noticed in life.
Based on assumptions and adding some fiction to create a story for the living dead from my point of view
Our hero in this story finds himself in a situation where he had to create a barrier between him and the people surrounding him
Later, he finds that the wall he built to protect himself became a cage to something evil.
So, the hero has to make decisions where he would find peace for him self without releasing the evil inside.
This is a short story now and your feedback would mean a lot.
Thanks :)
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