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Last published Sun, Apr 10, 2016
Carmella Breah Cummings is a girl who believes firmly in equality, freedom and justice:
three things she does not have, and doubts she will ever get.
She lives in an Illegal Child Facility in New America, ruled by a dictatorship.
By law she meets her parents and two older siblings at the age of sixteen, and gets to taste a bit of freedom.
But true freedom, she realizes, comes with slavery.
Just as ignorance is strength, and as peace... comes with war.
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