I think i'm in love

Penny is a really girly girl, but dresses like a tomboy because she doesn't like catching anyones attention. She always puts herself in other's shoes (not literally lol), and is really optimistic.
One day the guy she likes, says that he digs when girls dress like hoes, so Penny started dressing that way. A lot of things started happening, involving her best friend.

This is the first story I write, so please let me know how I should improve, or if you are enjoying it. Also english isn't my first language, so, sorry if I spell anything wrong.