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How NOT to Write Fanfiction // Khione's Revenge

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Books written by 11 year olds tend to be bad, but this one failed spectacularly. The writing itself was amazing, but everything else that could go wrong with it - plot holes, bad characterisation, random implementation of characters from other fandoms, Mary Sues - DID go wrong.
So here you have it - Khione's Revenge in its pure and original form, written from 2012-2014, with a couple of tips on how to write - or more specifically, how NOT to write - fanfiction.

[originally a copyrighted percy jackson fanfiction by @Atlantari in 2012 with help from @Visceral and @hopelesslyinept]
[this book was co-written by @Atlantari and @hopelesslyinept - mostly @Atlantari though]All Rights Reserved

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