Unexpected
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Ongoing6m
Last published Sat, Jul 13, 2013
I'm Ally Moore, a young adult. I'm trying to make something of my life. I want to help people; I want to do something with my life... so the world won’t forget that people can help each other. That's why I'm an FBI agent. That's why I solve murders with my partner Dean Johnson.
Until I find out my niece was at the crime scene.
She and her friends decided to throw a party on the first day of their Summer Vacation. And when the time came that everyone left and she and her friends were left over. Everything went terribly wrong.
And now it's my job to try and figure out what happened...
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