Try-out Chapters

So I don't write my main, favorite novels on Wattpad but if I have a chapter I like or dislike and want feedback on it, I'll put it here. It will only be one chapter or sometimes only one section and if you have any ideas on how to make it better or what you liked about it please tell me. I'm posting these so I can make my writing better.
Some of these chapters are also samples/tryouts for stories I would like to publish on Wattpad. So yeah. Please give feedback (nothing mean though, just positive corrections) Please. Thanks.