A Divergent Fanfic: What if: Abnegation: If I Stayed
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The Second book in my "Divergent:What if" Fanfic series! Although,there is no specific order to reading them. Here's a little bio for you:
What if Tris and Tobias stayed in Abnegation? Obeying his father. Staying with her parents. Her brother,gone.
What if the gang had also joined Abnegation?
Read "if I stayed"
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We were standing in my front yard.
"This is for your own good, Tobias."
He drew up a belt from a lawn chair and I turned, ready for the beating as usual.
That's when a heard a scream and a skinny girl from a few houses down came to my side, panting.
"Don't." She practically yelled at Marcus.
He just smirked. "And who do you think you are?"
She just gave him a cold look, then glanced at me. I was shocked.
"Beatrice."
And she ran.
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