'The Note in the Corked Bottle' (Joint Winner!) #ProjectConstellations
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Ongoing, First published Apr 17, 2016
For @ScienceFiction 's Anniversary Challenge, we had to produce a 10K story.

PROMPT: 'Inhabitants of Earth must take to the stars in order for the human race to survive. To remain would involve certain extinction. Where they go, what they encounter on the way, who and what they find at their destination is entirely up to you!'

For this one I took a nostalgic approach, and went with some World War II alternate history! Ultimately, I tried to pay homage to one of Science Fiction's greats, Phillip K. Dick.

Literary Warning - the narrative contains both American English and English English due to the split setting ;)

PS, I've added some dramatic YouTube audio - earphones, earplugs, and headphones advised - as is a PC/Laptop!

Enjoy ^_^

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