Hunted
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"I'll miss you Jake I hope you live a long happy life." I tried to smile at him but failed. "Shut up! You care for no one your trying to make me change my mind and for that you will die!" I flinched at his words. He stepped forward and raised his hand as a blue flame formed in his hand and he raised it at my heart. The flame shot toward me and time went slow. I secretly hoped that he would miss, but Jake never missed never. Pain burst through my chest and I screamed; it didn't last long but it's getting cold. Never once did I remove my eyes from Jake . I saw the black turn to green in an instant but it was too late. I saved him, I saved him,it's okay now I can go. Goodbye boys. Goodbye Nathan. Goodbye Jake. Goodbye nutella. Ha, one last joke before you die nice one Rain, way to go out with a bang.It's so cold, I'm numb, why can't I move "oh, hey mom can I come with you?" She nodded and smiled, how I missed that smile. Argghhhhh! the pain, no make it stop, it hurts Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh..................................
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{Completed - #12 highest} I was walking on a path all alone at midnight. I was just wondering around, until I saw a guy in a hoodie. He was beating the pulp out of another guy and one more man was on the ground, he was not moving. I gasped. 'Is he dead?' Or he can be unconscious, yeah 'el' he is just unconscious not dead. Duh! Who would kill a guy? As I was proceeding with my thoughts, that hoodie guy turned his face towards me. My heart had a mini heart attack. I turned my heels to the opposite direction and started to run. 'Run Ella, run for your life' was what my mind was screaming to me. I took turns without thinking, that guy was now following me and guess what? I took a wrong turn and which ended up being a dead end ' You are so dead' I thought. So, I started to think what I said last time to the people I love. 'Good night mom, love you.' to my mom, 'Stop annoying me! I'm going to bed.' to dad which also mean I love you, 'See you later Lu, love you!' to Luana. Okay my good bye says I love them all. Now I can die in peace. Granddad I'll meet you soon in the heaven, if you are there. I was still in my deep thoughts until I saw his silhouette. As, he get closer, my heart begin to race faster. I closed my eyes, until I heard him say "Ella?" O to the M to the G, this person actually knows me. I opened my one eye and saw him due to the small light hanging in that ally "Errrrr'ick!" I squeaked and mentally face palmed myself. Even at this state I'm calling him Errr'ick. "I'm sorry your highness, what can I do for you?" I squeaked again while trembling. The next second I heard his fits of laughter. He was rolling on the floor, actually rofling. I was glaring at him but I realised that I'm not in a position to glare. So, I made puppy dog face for him to spare my little life. He stopped but after seeing my face, he started to laugh again. He tried to say between his guffaws "You..... your face .....was epiccc!" He started to gasp for air and had tears in his eyes.

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