Carmen- short story
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Carmen was a mystery. She wasn't those girls that completely opened up or that completely hid themselves. She always expressed herself in her own way. She wore this red lipstick that went with her red curly hair and her eyes were this dark brown that seemed so full and thick but were so deep. She didn't care about anything or anyone. She often dated guys but always broke their hearts with no care. No one knew why she seemed fit in so perfectly but seemed galaxies away. Until one night, someone knew. Me.
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SHORT STORY!!
I wrote this story for a short story contest at my school but I got like 4th place in the district because it sucks. But this is my first piece of writing in which I really tried because there was a word limit. However, I am not limiting myself in this one so please enjoy.
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