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It is My first poem. It all about making a decision between a lot of choices. I think it is really familiar for us since we need to make a hard decision that will create the future.
So, I hope this poem will open your eyes about the best you need to do.
Future need to be shining like the star.
Sorry for the grammatical error. I am just try My best as an amateur in poetry.
Please support Me.
Thank You.
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