Love Between Brothers

First story been working on it since the 11th or 10 grade still editing and trying to write it at the same time please let me know if you like it will really mean the world to me good or negative reviews I don't care just let me know!

Desmond and Donna have been together for four year's nothing can break them apart .Desmond loses his job and desperately needing a place to stay and money, and has no other choice but to stay in Brooklyn and hustle with his brother. Until he can raise enough money to get the construction company he always dreamed about.
When Donna start to missing Desman after six months of him leaving and starts to get few and fewer phone calls as months go by. She decides to ask him if she can stay with him. He told her she could without questioning or asking his brother at all...
Quantavius is the most feared person in Brooklyn and not afraid of anything. He has police, attorney, and judges all on his payroll .But he's all about keeping his family safe so when his brother losses his job Quantavius tell him he can stay with him and save up his money enough so that he can be well off ...But he wasn't expecting this beautiful ,innocent ,intelligent female come knocking on his door. So what happen when emotion start to fly ?and attraction are hard to ignore ?Or when love come between brother's?