I got some complaints about all the pages and I am sorry, but when I wrote it I Wrote it and didn't stop so the chapters are more cut up now. NO 86 pages a chapter Yay!
I AM SCREAMING, the previous one had so much people reading it, and thanks so much! I wrote the au when I was a small infant, my drawing's improved and even my story telling.
The plot is technically still the same, maybe more chapters! I will take on any advice to improve, writing stories are now a thing for me nowadays.