The Wilderness Chronicles Third Person Rewritten
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When I first came up with the wilderness chronicles, the words came out, spilling onto the page. There was no streamlining. No tidying up.
Because of that it never read right. When I went back and looked at it, I could see that this story could do with being taken from a different angle. That is what this is, a different angle on a started in 1st person. At the moment many chapters have been planned out and I haven't added any more. This could end up never being finished but if the interest is there I know I will need to finish it once I have finished my college course and apprenticeship
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