There's a Castle Outside?!
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So this is a narrative I had to write for my Compostition 1 class a while back and I have decided to post it on here for some input and criticism. And just a fair warning; although I welcome both positive and negative criticism, I don't want to have to delete comments because of too much negativity.
Thanks for reading!
~Ayame
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