The Critique
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  • Reads 932
  • Votes 47
  • Parts 21
  • Time 37m
Ongoing, First published Apr 26, 2016
My favorite thing about Wattpad is that I get to enjoy reading stories from writers from all over the world. With a love for writing and good books what better way to help others find great books hidden under the piles of unnoticed books that Wattpad has in its vaults than to bring them you.

Along with helping the writers to improve on their storylines, writing and other things this book is filled with the books that I have critiqued. Hopefully, this will bring these hidden gems to your library so you may enjoy them as much I have.

I offer free critiques to writers of all genres within the Wattpad community. Within these critiques, I offer positive feedback, as well as a promotion of your book. Since marketing and editing are my specialties I offer advice to the writers on where to focus their improvements, along with their target markets and ways to improve growth in followers and how to keep what followers that you have.

If you would like to have your story, poem, or book critiqued by my feel free to inbox me with the following information (please send all of the requested information, leaving nothing blank).



Critique Request Form

Book/Story Title:

Wattpad Author Name:

Web Link to your story:

Genre:

Story Introduction or description: (Please do not send me a prologue but a brief introduction or description of your story outline)

Link to your book cover:
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