"Army Brat"

Heyo! So This is my first story, and It may not be that great, but hey. Worth a shot, right? I'm using my Attack on Titan OC, Captain Zachary O'Rielly. HEY HEY HEY NOOO. Dont you click away just yet! I know how cringe worthy a lot of AoT OC's can be (Im lookin at you, "Mary Sue X Levi"), but I've worked about a year on his character development, and I've tried really hard to make him as original as possible. He has no actual place in the main story line, and his canon story has him on the Easternmost point of the walls, away from the main characters, and away from the opportunity of ever meeting a canon character, past getting a letter from Erwin Smith, maybe once. Though in this story, he appears along the main characters of AoT, He has no extremely significant place in the overall story by Hajime Isayama, and his actions don't live past local legend (I.E: his comrades and such talking about him or to him). He will show no bias attitude towards other soldiers (such as love interests), and Ill try to make him look and read like any other soldier in the show, just doing what hes told. I've done my best to make him a likable, but still serious character. SO with that out of the way, theres one last thing. In the canon story, his child is murdered by the Military Police, who were bribed by the wall cult, because of rumors circulating Zachary's past as a lab experiment. While Zachary does indeed possess Titan shifting abilities, he hates himself for it, and its one of his biggest demons. He never uses the ability, except for once throughout the entire canon story, and its right before he kicks the bucket. In this particular story, Im going to write as if his child (daughter) were still alive, and he has no such abilities. Also... SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS... Ok lets do this!