I'm Not Crazy

So I know I posted a while ago that I was going to post another book (which I will) I just thought I'd post a first little teaser chapter of it and see what you guys think. I really need your feedback on this it'll really help me with the writing of the novel.

Maddy and Seb are twins. They stay at home with their single parent Dad the psychiatrist. Seb is studying full time to become a surgeon whilst Maddy is working hard to finally achieve her dream of owning a bakery. Seems pretty normal right? Not so much. Maddy has a mental health disorder called DID - or dissociative identity disorder. Separate personalities, separate people living inside her head. The twist is she doesn't know.
So when one day she accidentally wakes up with a small note in her hand not to trust anyone Maddy starts to try and unveil the truth about what's going on. Turns out her perfect family isn't just what they're quite cracked up to be.

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