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Shes broken

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Elsa Starr is a girl who fought like no one else, she didn't have anyone to lean on beside her best friend Arial Lorraine, so what if her best friend stabbed her, what if she couldn't take it anymore that she wrote a statement that would give her hell by her parents:
'That no family means no home
No home means living in fear
Living in fear means forced to be living in the dark
Living in the dark means fighting alone
Maybe if I told you, that I'm just 18 you're going to laugh thinking 'wtf am I talking about' cause my parents are technically alive and I'm still young, I don't have to think about anything cause I have no worries.... But can I tell you a secret?
I don't like my parents ... can I replace them? Should I leave them alone Cause I don't need them anyway? OR should I kill them?
I think it's a good idea..... HAHAHAH GOT YOU I won't kill them, but the thought of it is not really that bad in my case.
If you're wondering why I'm thinking this way, Or why do I hate them
You should be me to understand, I can prove that I'm not crazy'
she is a mature girl who is responsible and independent, She's a top student who works and studies and sometimes works as maid for her rich parents.
*Disclaimer* 
This story is not all depression, it has it's funny moment, it's deep moments, its romantic moments, and it's mysterious moments...
I tried to include everything that happens in our lives in this story... I hope you like it, and read the first chapters so you won't judge it by the description, because I figured that it sucked..
The last thing is, I wrote every bit of it, and if I quote anything from anywhere I will note it.All Rights Reserved

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When Elsa Queen was little she was popular, talented, athletic, and good at everything. After their parents died she gave it all up so her sister; Anna; could live her school dream. Now Elsa pretends to suck at everything, have nothing amazing about her, and be shy. She only can be herself at her job at a karaoke bar in another town. It is there where she gets offered an opportunity of a life time by someone named Hans South. After her sister and her few friend say some unforgivable stuff to her, she has had enough of pretending. She runs away with Hans and starts her life over in New York, changed her look, and goes by the name Icy. Anna and her friends at home regret the things they said, and search for Elsa, but found nothing. Anna has now graduated high school and took over the family company, Jack took over his company, Merida became a famous Olympic archer, Hiccup became a well renowned scientist, and Rapunzel became a famous photographer. One night during a get together watching the Victoria Secret Fashion Show they found someone they least expected…. Elsa? Elsa has been living in New York with Hans, who considers her his little sister. Together they have been helping make each other’s dreams come true, and proving people that they can be and do whatever they want. What happens when Elsa’s past catches up with her? What happens when the big five finds her, and see's her success? Will there be love and friendship, or will hatred grow? (A/N: No this is not a Helsa book, and Hans is not going to be a bad guy either. I find it way too predictable.)