Summer's Evening: A Short Story

Summer's Evening: A Short Story

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This is my very first short story! Its a little cliche, and I plan on posting more in the future. Please give feedback, any kind is appreciated :) Tips on how to improve are also appreciated! Thank you for reading! A young girl and her boyfriend decide to go out on a nice summer evening. Except--their fun quickly ends when she makes a shocking discovery.
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