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Evil Critiques

hummingbirdsinflight

Reads 2,152
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Parts 5
Time 30m

Reads 2,152
Votes 160
Parts 5
Time 30m

hummingbirdsinflight

I am an evil person. And I am here to either rip your story apart and tear it to shreds, fix a lot of minor issues, or love you till the day you die. 

Your story decides. 

Warning: The average story will be in the category of: "I am Satan and I shall rip your story apart." 

But if you think you've got what it takes to withstand a critique and come out above me? 

Well, I applaud your confidence. Come on in.

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X (discontinued) by jungle321jungle

You frown a bit, deciding whether to take it or leave it. Someone may come back... Even so you slowly open the front cover to read the first page. --- He told me I should keep a journal. Write down everything I could about my life. He said it would help for those mortals of the future. I said no. I thought it was stupid. But I will honor his last wish --- I'm a creature of darkness. I'm an abomination. I'm an outcast. I'm no one. I'm X. *DISCONTINUED*

Caged By Him by moonchild80

"WHY CAN'T YOU GET IT INSIDE YOUR HEAD?" He trapped my trembling body between his arms and slammed his fist into the wall. I flinch at the sound as I feel tears forming in my eyes. "I'M SICK AND TIRED OF YOUR CRYING. JUST ACCEPT THE FACT THAT YOU'RE NEVER LEAVING. THIS IS YOUR LIFE NOW, WITH ME" He spits, anger consuming his voice as I push myself further against the wall. Shutting my eyes closed and turning my face to the side as I do. Moments later, I feel his rough hand on my waist and his finger grazing my cheek. "Look at me, love." His hand grips onto my jaw, his thumb playing across my lower lip. He turns my face to meet his as I lower my gaze to the floor. He lowers himself to my level and I feel his breath fanning my cheek causing my breathing to become unsteady. "I love you so much, darling. But you need to learn. You need to learn that you won't be going anywhere. You're mine." With that being said, his other hand slides down to my waist "Your entire body, your mind, your soul. All mine." All I could do was tremble at his touch. How can someone so beautiful be so heartless? ~~~~~~~~~~ All a 19 year old Aurora Shaw wanted to do was work to make a living and volunteer at the orphanage. Unfortunately for her, ruthless and cunning 26 year old Mafia leader and billionaire Tristan Black had other plans for her. He's been waiting for the perfect moment to kidnap her and finally make her his queen after 2 years of watching and stalking her every move. He'd kill anyone who gets in the way of getting what he wants. What will happen when he ruins everything she wanted and forces her to marry him? Will she escape and resist him? Or will she submit and accept her fate?

//Ghost.// Valt × Shu: Beyblade Burst God by illuminatedreams

As I look in the mirror, all I see is a villain. /////// " What were you hiding under your calm façade? Were you crying but physically smiling? Were you pretending to be okay, as you pushed us away? You told all those lies, so I'm not sure what to believe. Are you really okay, Shu Kurenai? Or are you really dying inside.... " /////// Red Eye is smiling, Shu Kurenai is dying, and Valt Aoi is trying to fix all that he left behind. But can you really save someone who says they're fine? *cover art belongs to @mmplus_bj on twitter

Heart filled with love yet drown in vegenance |completed| by bubbleybunnies

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Yours Forcefully by romanticcrazyone

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Yours Faithfully by romanticcrazyone

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HOME [18+] by Meraki_Kri

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Their is no need of that power that fears everyone in my kingdom, i failed to protect that only person who was more than anything. I mean it when I say anything. I failed to protect you I'm an loser I'm the powerless person that doesn't have left anything without you. My life ends when you were laying their breathless and i can't save you...