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Caged By Him
"WHY CAN'T YOU GET IT INSIDE YOUR HEAD?" He trapped my trembling body between his arms and slammed his fist into the wall. I flinch at the sound as I feel tears forming in my eyes. "I'M SICK AND TIRED OF YOUR CRYING. JUST ACCEPT THE FACT THAT YOU'RE NEVER LEAVING. THIS IS YOUR LIFE NOW, WITH ME" He spits, anger consuming his voice as I push myself further against the wall. Shutting my eyes closed and turning my face to the side as I do. Moments later, I feel his rough hand on my waist and his finger grazing my cheek. "Look at me, love." His hand grips onto my jaw, his thumb playing across my lower lip. He turns my face to meet his as I lower my gaze to the floor. He lowers himself to my level and I feel his breath fanning my cheek causing my breathing to become unsteady. "I love you so much, darling. But you need to learn. You need to learn that you won't be going anywhere. You're mine." With that being said, his other hand slides down to my waist "Your entire body, your mind, your soul. All mine." All I could do was tremble at his touch. How can someone so beautiful be so heartless? ~~~~~~~~~~ All a 19 year old Aurora Shaw wanted to do was work to make a living and volunteer at the orphanage. Unfortunately for her, ruthless and cunning 26 year old Mafia leader and billionaire Tristan Black had other plans for her. He's been waiting for the perfect moment to kidnap her and finally make her his queen after 2 years of watching and stalking her every move. He'd kill anyone who gets in the way of getting what he wants. What will happen when he ruins everything she wanted and forces her to marry him? Will she escape and resist him? Or will she submit and accept her fate?Complete
Villain | KSJ
Jiyeon an ordinary and innocent girl met one fateful night that changed everything and got kidnapped by Seokjin, the ruthless King of the Underworld, she becomes trapped in a deadly game of power, secrets, and revenge. Seokjin believes she holds the key to finding his missing sister, who was taken by none other than Jiyeon's own fiancé. But during the chaos of her present, she discovers a heart wrenching truth about her past. Now, caught between a merciless villain and the ruins of her past, Jiyeon must fight to survive. But in the darkness of the underworld, is Seokjin truly the monster everyone fears, or is there more to him than meets the eye? . . . 📌No smuts in this book.
The Sins of Our Fathers
I went from a girl who didn't know how to kill to one who knew how to make dying hurt. Dear Diary, It sounds so harmless, so innocent, but what if it wasn't? What if it was the start of a plan to burn down the world? My father was an artist, a visionary, a truly great man; he was also a con man, a contract killer, and despised by everyone. He was the head of the Russian Mafia. Now he's dead. All I have left of him is the hate of those he oppressed, and his journal with a plan to end the world. Everyone always forgets about the villain's family, as far as their concerned we don't exist. We are forgotten, no fame, no fortune, only the residual hate. My name is Neoma Casimir and they have forgotten me too, but trust me when I'm through they won't make that mistake again. The clock is ticking. The end is coming.Complete
X (discontinued)
You frown a bit, deciding whether to take it or leave it. Someone may come back... Even so you slowly open the front cover to read the first page. --- He told me I should keep a journal. Write down everything I could about my life. He said it would help for those mortals of the future. I said no. I thought it was stupid. But I will honor his last wish --- I'm a creature of darkness. I'm an abomination. I'm an outcast. I'm no one. I'm X. *DISCONTINUED*Complete
Cruel Fairy Tale - Book 6: I Won't Cry
And now , I'm close to reality. Close enough to crush them one by one. They will not know that I am the only person behind all of their sufferings. I want them to get confused. I want them to look at me as an innocent man, who does not know anything about what they do, or what they we're planning to do. I want them to be clueless about what I'm doing , about what I am thinking. But I guarantee to those people,if someday they will know about me, about what I am doing ; I won't cry and I will never stop crushing them until they become ash in my eyes. For them I will have no mercy. I will remove their mask for everyone will see the truth in them.Complete
//Ghost.// Valt × Shu: Beyblade Burst God
As I look in the mirror, all I see is a villain. /////// " What were you hiding under your calm façade? Were you crying but physically smiling? Were you pretending to be okay, as you pushed us away? You told all those lies, so I'm not sure what to believe. Are you really okay, Shu Kurenai? Or are you really dying inside.... " /////// Red Eye is smiling, Shu Kurenai is dying, and Valt Aoi is trying to fix all that he left behind. But can you really save someone who says they're fine? *cover art belongs to @mmplus_bj on twitterComplete
What He Wrote
"I hate how the human race complicates things. You're born, and then you die. The space between that is a grey area. It's a blank line. It's all up to you on how you fill the line. You can write good or bad or spontaneous or wonderful-it's up to you. The only catch is that you don't know how long that blank line is. And it sucks that I want to fit spontaneous and wonderful on that line, because for some reason, it got cut too short."Complete
Dark Love (Shu Kurenai X Reader)
1 on #shukurenai on 23 June 2021 1 on #beybladeburst on 25th June 2021 I took off my mask for a while and then started thinking about her, Y/n. Do I really deserve her? I kept my ruthless behaviour in front of her because I am scared that she will leave me. Am I really capable of her innocent pure love? I don't know. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "I love Shu, not Red Eye. I am with him because I am scared." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A/n = May include harrasment. The chapter with harrasment will have this symbol '🚫'. This is just a frictional story. I don't own any characters that are included in the story. If my story failed to meet your expectations then I apologise for that. Hope you like it. Warnings • language • violence • self harm • sexual harrasmentComplete
"WHY CAN'T YOU GET IT INSIDE YOUR HEAD?" He trapped my trembling body between his arms and slammed his fist into the wall. I flinch at the sound as I feel tears forming in my eyes. "I'M SICK AND TIRED OF YOUR CRYING. JUST ACCEPT THE FACT THAT YOU'RE NEVER LEAVING. THIS IS YOUR LIFE NOW, WITH ME" He spits, anger consuming his voice as I push myself further against the wall. Shutting my eyes closed and turning my face to the side as I do. Moments later, I feel his rough hand on my waist and his finger grazing my cheek. "Look at me, love." His hand grips onto my jaw, his thumb playing across my lower lip. He turns my face to meet his as I lower my gaze to the floor. He lowers himself to my level and I feel his breath fanning my cheek causing my breathing to become unsteady. "I love you so much, darling. But you need to learn. You need to learn that you won't be going anywhere. You're mine." With that being said, his other hand slides down to my waist "Your entire body, your mind, your soul. All mine." All I could do was tremble at his touch. How can someone so beautiful be so heartless? ~~~~~~~~~~ All a 19 year old Aurora Shaw wanted to do was work to make a living and volunteer at the orphanage. Unfortunately for her, ruthless and cunning 26 year old Mafia leader and billionaire Tristan Black had other plans for her. He's been waiting for the perfect moment to kidnap her and finally make her his queen after 2 years of watching and stalking her every move. He'd kill anyone who gets in the way of getting what he wants. What will happen when he ruins everything she wanted and forces her to marry him? Will she escape and resist him? Or will she submit and accept her fate?
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