The Device

The Device

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Hey guys, this is just a little short story I wrote in english. If you want me to do more let me know and i'll think about it. I'm not sure yet cause I wrote it today in class and this is the first time I have written something proper in a very long time. Please let me know of any spelling mistakes or anything I can improve :) Basically it's set in the 80's, a guy called Alistair is at a basement party for new years eve. And then some serious shit happens, so read ahead if you wanna find out what happens.
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