Loving, Carmen
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Last published Fri, Dec 17, 2021
I look in the rear view mirror, as happy as I could be. My new car lined up perfectly with the parking spot, just like how my dad told me it should be. I was quite proud if I do say so myself, because I had just received my license and was ready to rule the world with my new car. As I began to drive out of the parking lot, a loud shatter echoed through my ears.
What could it be?
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