Make love last
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  • Reads 730
  • Votes 13
  • Parts 8
  • Time 53m
Ongoing, First published Jul 22, 2013
A young girl named Carmen Sky was in love with her best friend Kameel Jones. But what happens when a new kid comes to school.? Will that love fade and break away and grow stronger for someone else.? Or will she just stop loving altogether and harm herself and the people who surround her.?
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Yeah I was in Juvie. Get over it. by moonlightariaturner
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Carmen is screwed up. She's been in and out of juvie all her life and seriously there's no place she'd rather be. Until she gets released from juvie unexpectedly, given a probation officer, and forced to live with a normal family and go to a normal school. Carmen doesn't even know the definition of normal. Much less family, or school. Separated from the only system she's known and has stayed constant all her life, she finds it hard to adjust to the world outside the concrete building. The structure and rules aren't the same. In juvie, rules were like opinions, people ignored them. But in the real world, supposedly it wasn't socially acceptable to steal cash, or graffiti the front of the school building. Enter the Harrisons, the family who's taking care of her. The matriarch of the family hates her criminal record. Sammy, the seven-year-old, is too clingy, too innocent, and too naive to understand anything. Then there's Jay, the guy she's forced to share a room with. A self-righteous son of a bitch, Jay doesn't understand Carmen and doesn't understand her self destructive way of thinking. Though he's not bothered by her, he's fascinated with her. The family represents the structure and rules that Carmen doesn't, nor wants to, understand. But as Carmin starts to push back at the structure and rules suddenly rushed into her life, it starts to change. Her whole way of living is thrown off balance, what she deems normal isn't. And through a series of events, she starts to spiral out of control, and she doesn't know if someone can pull her up from that. Carmen was given a second chance, but is it a good chance, or is it just another recipe for getting thrown right back to square one, like she always is? Because second chances don't usually get handed out. And she's about to learn what it means to get a second chance. ____
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Growing up in a small town, she was the girl next door yet one of the guys. Until she wasn't. And then, Carmen wasn't there anymore. The guys adored her and when she left they seriously thought it was just for college. When she hadn't returned for years, she ended up a favorite memory for them all. Until it was time for a Homecoming Reunion. Now she was again on the forefront of their minds and they each made a plan to keep her home this time. Written by Gigi Foster and copyrighted. Please advise if you find this published under another name off of this service. *** Completed Jan '22. Book Two is being written and will be shared as soon as I can. Follow me for updates.