Secret Reflections
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Last published Tue, Aug 16, 2016
I've never written poems in my life, but the words simply flowed from pen to paper.
These are the first poems I've ever written, so please be sure to give LOTS OF FEEDBACK AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!!! Any comments are welcome!
Well, I hope you enjoy these!
SIDENOTE: If you read these poems carefully, you'll find that they tell a story. See if you can figure out what's going on in the narrator's life!
Also some lines may seem random, but trust me: every line in every poem is there for a reason
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