A Second To Understand

This sounds like a typical syfy story, something they would make a creature feature about on tv, but not so unrealistic as mud monsters and vampires. Jade Aniello and the entire year of her college class is sponsored to take a month long excursion on an island which is owned by an unknown millionaire, but this island is something out of a nightmare. Nobody anticipated the tailspin their story would entail.
Please leave comments after reading, I actually want anyone's input on ideas or possible changes to make it better or if there are any SERIOUS grammatical errors, although I think I found all of those. Thank you for reading and enjoy!