This is the unedited, first chapter or so of my new book, "Ari", for my fans to read and critique. Please feel free to leave some constructive criticism whilst I get the creative juices flowing! PLEASE NOTE: Cover, description, edited updates to come. My first book, "Until it All Changed" is PG 13, however, "Ari" WILL be classified as mature due to strong language, sexuality, and other mature themes.