The Dance of the Lost
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Last published Sun, Apr 13, 2014
"Why are you doing this?" I asked. The strange guy just smirked and leaned down to whisper in my ear. "Come with me and fine out" 17 year old Elizabeth has been living in the past her entire life. Oh yes, quite literally in deed. She was born in the future and sent to the past for her own protection, because she holds a powerful gift that she doesn't even know about. It's called the gift of the Lost. A select few babies each year are secretly injected with something to bless them with this awesome power when they turn 18. By whom you may ask? Why the Lost race of people of couse. No one has ever seen one, and it seems that no one ever will, or will they? These children are frowned upon by The Society, and their families are usually hunted down and killed, including the child. 20 year old Will Knight has been taught one task, and one task only. To hunt down Elizabeth and bring her to the future for some important task that he has no idea about. When he turned 18 he gained his expected gift of the Lost, tracking. 2 weeks before Elizabeth's 18th birthday he finally pinpoints where she is. Little does he know that the next two weeks of his life are going to be the wildest ever. Much is expected for both Elizabeth and Will. Hate, anger, good times and bad, friendship, adventure and lov- Oops! I have said too much! Guess you have to read to find out! Okay I suck at writing desciptions. All i can say is take the book for a test drive if you like it, good for you! If you dont i do except constructive critisism, but please, dont go over board and be jerks. Anywho, grab some bacon (or tofu if you're into that) sit your butt down and READ, COMMENT, AND VOTE! This message has been approved by Barac Obama (Not Really lol!)
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