A Long Broken World
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  • Reads 7,478
  • Votes 166
  • Parts 14
  • Time 2h 13m
Ongoing, First published May 06, 2016
Red Blitz a Young colt who moved into cloudsdale and having trouble making friends. Until he meets a young filly named rainbow dash. while the years go by and these friends become closer than  brother and sister and blitz have encountered a great Feelings towards The  beautiful Rainbow Mare. But what happen when he saw something that broke his heart and left town. Now three years past and he went back to a place where it all started.
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Lost Loyalty

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Rainbow Dash hid true feelings, her past, behind her attitude of confidence. She pushes herself to be the best to prove her past demons wrong. Pushes herself for her dreams. Pushes herself for her friends. 'Loyal? What in tarnation? She can only be described as self centred.' 'She can be a right party pooper!' 'Darling...She is a bit...well egotistic.' 'She's...not all bad. She's just not good.' 'According to my observations... she isn't really a great friend.' Dash hearing that lead her to confronting her friends. Her suspions confirmed breaks her cover. All she focused on was speed. No more dreams. No more light in her eyes. Soon her energy fades as she misses key things. Sleep. Food. All she has left is speed and she won't focus on anything else. "Rainbow Dash. Are you ok?" "No. I'm not." Please don't kill me... Humanised but NOT Equestria Girlsde WARNING: Contains mentions of abuse, rape. Contains descriptions of depression and suicide.