Girl in Pain | {old version}
  • Reads 36,329
  • Votes 2,172
  • Parts 21
  • Time 2h 18m
  • Reads 36,329
  • Votes 2,172
  • Parts 21
  • Time 2h 18m
Complete, First published May 06, 2016
[Winner of The Fiction Awards 2018] 
[2nd place winner of the New Writer's Award]

Sometimes even the purest souls are full of darkness. And sometimes the past haunts its victims until there's nothing left. Sometimes they have to fight against their bullies to survive. But what if this time the girl is not alone?

Copyright 2016-2021 S.O.Simons All rights reserved.

!!! new edited & improved version available clicking on the external link or on my Inkitt profile SOSimons !!!

__________✧__________

Highest ranking: #44 in Short Story (24.05.18)
#2 - nomorebullying (22.05.18) | #4 - shortstory (19.05.18) | #1 - sad (21.05.18) | #1 - numb (26.05.18) |  #1 - grieving (06.06.18) | #5 - memory (14.07.18) | #5 - amnesia (15.08.18) | #155 - loneliness (24.05.20)
All Rights Reserved
Sign up to add Girl in Pain | {old version} to your library and receive updates
or
#58numb
Content Guidelines
You may also like
Secret Mind ✓ by sadlyish
32 parts Complete
"She's right! She's right! I don't cut in the right spot." My hold tightens on my wrist. The red blood oozes out of my wrist. I slide up and grab my bag and run out of the bathroom. I don't care if people can see the blood I just want to get out. I race for the doors and shove through people. I earn a lot of glares and glances that read "weirdo." I ignore and push. I run to my house and lock myself in my bathroom. I don't bother closing the front door cause I don't care if people come in to kill me. I grab my razor and cut deep cuts into my arm and wrists falling into a pool of my own blood. • • • Evangeline has a great life. Friends? Check! Good grades? Check! Loving family? Check! But what if she has secrets that nobody knows of? What if the only thing she can trust is her secret diary? What if slowly but surly she's dying inside? How can an innocent twelve year old deal with these problems? Will she keep on facing these problem till the day she breaks. Her school burns down forcing her into a different school to meet different people and she has to fit into a different lifestyle as well. Meet Evangeline. Now at 17 years of age in a new high school. Not all girls anymore. No uniform. Meet Drake. Your classic bad-boy. He just moved to Saint Abigail high school. He is assigned partners with the quiet, calm, unnoticed Evangeline. As time progresses he finds that she isn't as happy on the inside as she is on the outside. Can he save her? Or is it too late? • • • Some rude language. Depression and cutting. Don't say I didn't warn you. Okay, I wrote this at the start of this year (may 2016) and I had very poor writing skills. This book hasn't been edited and the whole idea is cliche so I wouldn't recommend you read it but I'm not stopping you, either. Read at your own risk. • • • Copyright © 2017 by -moonlust. All rights reserved.
Fixing Her  by michelledicorroway
55 parts Complete Mature
Finished; September 13th 2019 #10 abuse #10 teenfiction #8 stepdad #6 hope #3 badboys #3 broken #1 escape #1 goodgirl #1 hate #1 stepbrother #1 youngadult #1 school Reading List Featured - Teen Fiction ~ Despite all the fear, panic and the voice inside her, Hayden Kendricks still sent that one message to Parker Graham, the university girl offering her a room. After one year of hell, nightmares and pain, she's completely done. She's desperate for a room on the other side of the country with one simple demand; that her host is a female. So when she ends up being a he, what does Hayden do? During the wait to switch place, she grows quite attached to the care, kindness, humor, simplicity and courage the five boys show her. She grows attached to the stubbornness and love that feed their will not to give up on including her in everything. So what happens when the paralyzing book of her nightmares once more opens and is read out loud for not only her, but now, also those five boys? Easy. She tries running away again. But... She underestimates the love that those boys have towards her, because they're willing to do everything and anything, except letting her go. Except letting her remain broken. They're gonna do everything and anything, to Fix Her. And who knows? Maybe, despite the lies, the broken hearts, tears, and that one man behind everything, things can get better? Maybe, the strong love of five boys, each one different from the other, can force its way through the thick walls around Her? Or maybe... Fear will end up being stronger than love?
Rewrite The Stars by EllieBarker791
31 parts Complete Mature
"No!" I yell out, trying to shake the shadows hands off my cold, shivering body. Hoping that he'd let me go home, and fast. "No! Get off me! Please..." Now I'm pleading. Someone come save me from this monster, this monster that I used to know oh so well. That was 11 months ago, and now my demons have come back to haunt the paranoid girl I still am. sometimes "No" isn't enough for some people. Yet when I meet someone during one of my darkest moments, is it fate or just another mistake? Nick, (Bi, Boy) Steven, (Gay, Boy) Phil, (Bi, Boy) Harry, (Bi, Boy) Jake, (Gay, Boy) Cody, (Straight, Boy) Jacob, (Gay, Boy) Harley, (Bi, Girl) Dawn, (Bi, Girl) Kasi, (Straight, Girl) Ari, (Straight, Girl) Rose, (Straight, Girl) Bryan, (Gay, Boy) Heather, (Pans, Trans Boy- Harvey) Nikky, (Straight, Girl) Ben, (Straight, Boy) Rosie, (Straight, Girl) Harley❤Cody Ben❤Harley Harley+Bryan - Besties Nick❤Steven Phil❤Harry Jake❤Jacob Rosie+Harley - Mother And Daughter Book dedicated to: Sydney-Louise - Thank you for being there for me, big sis, love ya xx Book 2: It has been 2 years since the disappearance of both Cody and Dawn and Harley stops at nothing to find them, she loses hope every so often but she always picks herself up afterwards. But what happens when she's fighting for what seems like a lost cause? Book dedicated to: Isabelle, Katie, Evans and Skittles - Thank you for always pulling me back and being there xx Book 3: After spending 3 years searching for her best friend and boyfriend, Harley spent her time either in a depressed state since the tragic death of her mother, or in a mental hospital, after being accused of being crazy. Nobody believed her. That was, until, the unexpected happened at just the right time. But could that be enough to save Harley from her previous loss? Book dedicated to: My Best friends - Thanks for being my sunshines, thanks for being here, i personally found my stars, you lot💙xx © to EllieBarker791
You may also like
Slide 1 of 10
I Will Save You ✔ cover
Secret Mind ✓ cover
Saving The Broken cover
Don't Give Up On Me ✔ cover
G R A Y   M E M O R I E S | ✔️completed (edited by me!) cover
Fixing Her  cover
Rewrite The Stars cover
The Art of Starting Over cover
Original Short & Long Stories! (old) cover
The truth in our songs cover

I Will Save You ✔

39 parts Complete

Haley Jacobs is not your typical teenager. Her once perfect life, long gone. She has gone through hell and back, and is barely hanging on by a thread. She's not only running from her past, but she is also running away from Him. Haley is strong girl and wants to be loved, but can't let people in due to fear from her past. Haley starts a new school hoping to stay invisible, but nothing ever goes her way. She is thrown in to a group with the school's five bad boys making people notice her. They slowly break her walls down revealing secrets that she is so desperate to hide. With each secret that is revealed, her life and those around her, are in danger. Will they still look at her the same once they know her past? What will happen to her if He finds her? #1 in hiding on 4/21/2020 #1 in hiding on 3/7/2020-3/22/2020 #2 in hiding on 2/27/2020 & 3/23/2020 #35 in Teen Fiction on 8/25/2020 #688 in Young Adult on 8/25/2020 #2 in boys on 12/20/2020 This book was formerly named "The Girl With the Dead Eyes" (**Please give this book a chance. I'm not great at writing summaries.**) This story contains sensitive content. I do not go into extreme detail though. This story does contain foul language. Please read at your own risk**