I Kept my Promise
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SEQUEL TO PROMISE
Olivia went back to school after the devastating day where she found out her best friend died while saying I love you to her, everyone feels sympathy towards her, even Amanda, Amanda has regret for what she did to Olivia and wishes she can take it back, but things in the past can't be changed, Olivia wishes she can do the same.
Olivia kept her promise that she made with Kyle but the only part is that she isn't the happy laughing girl anymore, everyone knows not to bother her right now, all but one, the new kid, his name is Jarod he has the same dark brown hair and blue eyes just like Kyle, Jarod tries to talk to Olivia , but when they first talk and when Olivia first looks up at him she thinks it's Kyle, but now Olivia broke some of the promise, she is broken, and Jarod tries to help but what if she couldn't handle it anymore? What if she loved Kyle so much that it literally hurt and Jarod couldn't get there in time.....
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