Goodbye
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Last published Mon, Aug 27, 2012
hey guys, these peoms are from my heart. a year and a half ago, a friend of mine died. we were close when we were little but we grew apart and ill never be able to change that with her. ive written these poems throughtout my grieving and if you could give me some feedback on them it would be really appriciated!
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