"The boulder seemed like it was... moving. No, it wasn't just moving... it was standing up. In fact, you might have said that this wasn't a boulder at all. I sat on the grass, my mouth gaping at the gigantic, ugly, monstrous creature in front of me..."
What would you do if you suddenly woke up in a world that wasn't your own?
In a strange land filled with magic, monsters and many other extraordinary things, Abigail Summers just wants to find a way home. Unfortunately for her, that may end up being more difficult than it sounds. What starts as a simple quest quickly spirals out of control, and it turns out that she might have more to do with this world than she originally thought.
A.N. -- I'd really appreciate feedback on this story. Positive, negative, both, I'm not picky. If you feel like you have the time, I'm trying to improve on my writing skills so any comments would be MUCH appreciated.
What will you do when you suddenly find yourself in a world of magic for no reason?
What will you do when you find out that you came here with a mosquito that kept harassing you for over 5 years?
This is the story of Ichor Redwood, the young man who found himself in this exact situation. Will he collapse in a world that runs on different rules than what he had been born and raised in for his entire life? Or will he be able to adapt to it and make it to the top of the world itself?
Well at least, he would have someone to take this journey with him to the end. Even if it is a mosquito that kept asking for his blood to drink.
Note: This is my first novel and I'm not a native English speaker, so please help review my novel to help me get better at writing it.
Note 2: Thank you morfusmax1 for being the unofficial proof-reader for this story. The only reason why you are unofficial is that I don't know your details personally and that I am too poor to pay wages lol.