Wow! There playing soccer "said Lia Collins" The fifth grade nerd. That looks like a cool game. It's a sport not a game you silly nerd. Who said that "asked Lia" ? I did! "said the mean seventh grader Liam Hart" Lia described Liam as a big bad, rude, hateful, careless, piece of dried up mud. Lia's older brother Jack Collins slammed out of the big fat school doors. What's the matter Jack "Lia asked"? I heard that the Soccer team were playing against is the best team in the city. We're going to lose like poor wet mice. Oh so that's why you're so mad "said Lia". As Lia and Jack got on the school bus Lia asked Jack if he thought his mom would let Lia try out soccer. Jack said that's a good idea! Your a awesome passer when me and you pass back and forth. Thanks Jack! "said Lia" I'm asking mom!
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