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This is my first fictional piece for something other than school that I've written! I feel accomplished, even though I shouldn't! That's a good feeling, right? Time is the story of Travis, a boy who is thrust into the dangerous worlds of the Forces, the Infinite, and-dreadful as it is-thinking. For the first time in his life, he gets to experience the world, instead of living in the peaceful forest with his guardians. Let's see what happens, shall we? Reading the Prologues is important! They're pretty much chapters too, but they're reserved for mainly stories from the point of view of Forces. This story takes place in a world separate from Earth. In this world, people have Gods and Forces. Gods are the beings they pray to, and the Forces are the things that do all the work. It's a win-win relationship. This is my first full story. You may say that it sucks as much as you want... if you want to. I'd like constructed criticism. Confused by any of the magic, physics, or beliefs? Any questions at all can be asked in the comments for each story part. Sorry, but the different font types I used for the Forces (such as American Typewriter for Death) wouldn't work. I can't change font size for some other characters either, so you don't really get the full effect. I'll try to add more description to how they talk so that the effect is not lost. This book is finished!!!! The next book, currently being written, is Nature! If you liked this, please check Nature out!
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This is my very, very first novel I have ever made. It is 307 pages, and 39 chapters-- 45 in all including prologues+epilogue. Book 2 will come out soon, guys! Under the Shadows of Time, Friends die, Friends Disappear, and an Amazing Adventure Begins Ember's friends die. Terra dies. He doesn't know how to live without her... But when he finds a note saying she's alive, he knows he will find her, save her, and live his life with her. But when that is changed when Terra tries to kill him, how will he be able to save her and have her love him? Maybe he was just wishing for too much. Besides... He'll have to save the world either way... Is he too Weak? Too strong, even? Or too early or late?  When Kyra finds out who she is meant to be, she starts to remember what she was re-born for. She knows that she must save the animal kingdom and her love Eve. Koda knows everything, even though he's a fox, and he knows what's best for Kyra. When she decides to save Eve and meet up with the human siblings, Twirl and Milo, at the castle, they don't, and she knows something is totally wrong. Losing all her friends, she meets Ember, a Morpheen with a hero's brain. Perfect for staying under-cover and not becoming the center of attention. When they finally arrive...When the world starts to fall apart..then she knows it's time to step up and use her forbidden powers to use... Will it kill the whole world like it did her village, save the world from total destruction?  Milo doesn't know what to expect when everything changes when his town is burned down... He is teleported to the future when Hippogriffs, Phoenix, Phipogrix, and Morpheens rule the world. When his friend Eve is taken away to Fire Den Castle, and Kyra disappears, Milo knows he'll save them, and take care of his sister. But when his sister dies from his own powers, he knows it's time to step up and try his best to use his powers for good. So, when Kyra and Ember both need his powers, he knows he can protect them.

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