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Complete, First published May 12, 2016
This is my first fictional piece for something other than school that I've written! I feel accomplished, even though I shouldn't! That's a good feeling, right?

Time is the story of Travis, a boy who is thrust into the dangerous worlds of the Forces, the Infinite, and-dreadful as it is-thinking. For the first time in his life, he gets to experience the world, instead of living in the peaceful forest with his guardians. Let's see what happens, shall we?

Reading the Prologues is important! They're pretty much chapters too, but they're reserved for mainly stories from the point of view of Forces.

This story takes place in a world separate from Earth. In this world, people have Gods and Forces. Gods are the beings they pray to, and the Forces are the things that do all the work. It's a win-win relationship.

This is my first full story. You may say that it sucks as much as you want... if you want to. I'd like constructed criticism.

Confused by any of the magic, physics, or beliefs? Any questions at all can be asked in the comments for each story part.

Sorry, but the different font types I used for the Forces (such as American Typewriter for Death) wouldn't work. I can't change font size for some other characters either, so you don't really get the full effect. I'll try to add more description to how they talk so that the effect is not lost.

This book is finished!!!! The next book, currently being written, is Nature! If you liked this, please check Nature out!
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