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Deltontino
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Faboyle
Ongoing, First published May 15, 2016
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Let me get a few things straight, okay? Deltontino is a planet. A planet far away from Earth. Things are pretty different there, but both planets started the same way. Ever heard of the Big Bang theory on how earth was created and how life started? Well when Earth was created so was Deltontino, but our sun split when the planets were created and one part drifted away taking Deltontino with it.

 Simple things are different there. Rain is acidic to the skin of some of the people of Deltontino (yet snow isn't). Rain is a mainly brown maroon and snow is mainly purple maroon. Clouds are mint green. Lightning is gold and silver. Grass changes colors with the weather. Humans look the same, but some features are different colors than that of people here.

 This book is complicated because there are two boys and five girls. On top of that there is a law on planet Deltontino that says girls must be married by age 20 and boys by 21. That is because it is in the genes of  people on Deltontino that they will become sick and die within two weeks of turning that age if they are not married. This story will take you through outer space and beyond! So don't forget your rocket and space suit!
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