Dark Hooded Figures

This is a short story-type piece that I wrote for my English class last year when I was practicing more suspenseful storytelling. It is a stand-alone piece and a lot of the surrounding plot is left to interpretation. It is an excerpt from an unwritten story. It is a scene where a girl and her friend are in her room, hiding from the antagonistic hooded figures. It is a short read and I would love feedback.