Angel of Inferno (sample chapters)

Important Note: So just a quick disclaimer here, this isn't the official draft of the story. This is a few sample chapters I wrote when I was figuring out the bare bones of the whole thing. The actual story itself is in progress, which I've decided to refrain from posting until I know for sure I'm committed to this particular draft. So consider this a teaser of some sorts. Have a look and I would still appreciate any feedback you have! Thanks for checking this out!

The Doors of Inferno have been opened. The Seven Deadly Sins have escaped and the angels are helpless to stop it. To top it all off, they must leave the fate of Septurig in the hands of a cheerful inventor, a sour Endowed, a charming thief, and Ayda, a hybrid who transforms into a demon by night. Follow these four misfits as they travel through the steam- powered Kingdoms of Septurig to find the means to stop this spread of evil. But as they progress, they will soon find that even the holiest of them all is not safe from sin. Rated PG-13 for language, violence, and (possibly) sexual themes as of now, but the rating is subject to change.