Point of No Return
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Last published Mon, Sep 5, 2016
Two friends, Halle Mitchell and Skylee Simpson, who are so alike they could be the same person are both detectives, well sort of. Halle works at a simple desk job at an old police station, but she wants to be a real detectives one day like Skylee who works at Metro PD's second unit. Then one day she gets promoted to the same unit no less!
Halle and Skylee both fall for their partners over the corse of a new case, but some obstacles stand in their way. The case hits a little close to home and goes deeper then anyone would have guessed. Will Halle and Skylee be able to survive long enough to be with their new found loves or is this case to dangerous?
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This is a Metro PD fanfiction and also kind of a fanfiction of a fanfiction by my good friend @Serena-Daniels
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She's panting, flushed and breathless like something from another century. It hurts to look at her, so stunningly alive in a way he isn't. Almost smiling, too. She has the kind of lips that need undiluted devotion. "You've always looked at me," she breathes. Yes, and he finds himself thinking about ruin. The right kind, like his knuckles against her jaw to shake her apart. Freedom. Maybe in another life, he brushes the hair off her shoulder and whispers, 'Eyes on me.' Maybe in another life, they have time. 𝑫𝒐 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒉𝒆𝒂𝒓 𝒊𝒕? 𝑻𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒄𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒎𝒔 𝒃𝒆𝒕𝒘𝒆𝒆𝒏 𝒔𝒊𝒍𝒆𝒏𝒄𝒆. She isn't his to protect. He's a cop, she's taken, and rules are rules. But Faro Wyatt has mapped every freckle on her nose and dreamt of the oceans in her eyes. His resolve is weakening. So when the radio crackles with a single call, he's breaking every rule from here on out. C O N T A I N S : ❤︎ mature content ❤︎ morally dark-grey mmc ❤︎ violence/abuse ❤︎ men yearning No cheating Copyright © 2025-present Laurel Montaze (immoralLaurel). This body of work (story, characters, ideas) is available exclusively on Wattpad. If you're viewing it on a different website/platform or under a different username, it has been illegally stolen. Please notify the original author. © All Rights Reserved Updates: at least once every 2 weeks (hopefully more)
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