Control (old version)
VannaDelRey
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  • Reads 194
  • Votes 9
  • Parts 11
  • Time 1h 54m
VannaDelRey
Ongoing, First published May 18, 2016
Mature
agegapcontrolhighschoolmysteryobsessedpossessiveromancesuspense
"Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me."

In which a girl stumbles from one bad decision to down a hole of uncertainty. Everything's not what it seems, or is it? In a life of clichés, can Alice handle the unexpected masked in a beautiful face?
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