Transient Equilibrium
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All they want is freedom.
Two syllables, seven letters, one word, a hundred different meanings, the starter of thousands of conflicts. It is the one thing all people crave most. We are brought into this world with a sense of right to it. We strive for it. We fight for it. Seems simple enough right? Everyone deserves it. Yet, without control, freedom would not exist, and likewise, without freedom, control could not be implemented. People strive for freedom and order, but one cannot exist without the presence of the other. Every power known since the beginning of time has tested this. How much control and order can be placed before we span and cry out for our freedom? At what point do we lose sight if just how much we long for freedom?
Freedom. The one thing this society does not have. The one thing that will not be given to us. Freedom is the price you pay for existing; if you can even call it that.
AN: This is a rough draft-- it is called that for a reason--after it is finished I am going to go back and fix/change a lot of the story, so don't be hating on it
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