Transient Equilibrium

Transient Equilibrium

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All they want is freedom. Two syllables, seven letters, one word, a hundred different meanings, the starter of thousands of conflicts. It is the one thing all people crave most. We are brought into this world with a sense of right to it. We strive for it. We fight for it. Seems simple enough right? Everyone deserves it. Yet, without control, freedom would not exist, and likewise, without freedom, control could not be implemented. People strive for freedom and order, but one cannot exist without the presence of the other. Every power known since the beginning of time has tested this. How much control and order can be placed before we span and cry out for our freedom? At what point do we lose sight if just how much we long for freedom? Freedom. The one thing this society does not have. The one thing that will not be given to us. Freedom is the price you pay for existing; if you can even call it that. AN: This is a rough draft-- it is called that for a reason--after it is finished I am going to go back and fix/change a lot of the story, so don't be hating on it
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Before the fall of Earth humanity built a great colony ship, ten thousand of the colonist left Earth for a hundred year journey to Gillespie. They came from all over the Earth leaving a planet knowing they would never see another in their lifetime. The Ark is a rotating cylinder the size of a large island with its own train system. It's divided into three main sections, the city, the framlands, and the Lowers. The people are divided into three groups as well, Uppers, Middles and Lowers. Uppers are made of elite scientist, Astro-crops, bureaucrats they made up about 3% of the population. The Middles are are the farmers, the guard, teachers, doctors, the food processors, clothes makers and of course the mechanical maintenance workers. They make-up the 97% of the 10,000 counted citizens. The lowers are criminals and children born to un-paired parents. They live separated from the middles and Upper. In lowers you work in water reclamation or in one of the fish farms that supply protein to the ship. In the year 2149 Dylan De Rovia is trying to wrap her head around the idea that in two year's she'll be paired. That they call marriage on the Ark. Pairing is good most who are paired do end-up staying together because while genetics play good part in determining a match so does personality. Some people choose to use spend this time having a good time with as many partners as possible. Dylan however, vowed that she would never fall in love with anyone before pairing. The universe had other plans however, when Dylan learns that she'll pair with an Upper named Kyive Sinclar life gets more complicated than ever. Falling in love is hard enough falling in love in space that the story.

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